Wednesday, May 27, 2015

IS IT A STORY?

FINISH THE STORY AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT SENTENCES.
( notes ) UNFIXED AND RAW.... BUT

Part One   What is his Flaw? He is not prepared to deal with Psychopaths.

Investigator, Wellington Doud works a missing persons file for the  Flour Bluff State Bank, expecting to locate the delinquent client,
but what he finds goes way past skip-tracing.

Chapter One

I WAS OUT IN THE STICKS. 80 miles as the crow flies from Mexico, in an outlying part of the unincorporated county near Corpus Christi, Texas, at the end of a long caleche road on a lot over grown by vegetation that would make Tarzan homesick, I got out of my air conditioned dark green Impala and began to sweat.  

I left the engine running and I didn't like the feeling of the hot air rising from the car's wheel well, as I walked across the gravel to the front door of the trailer. The humidity in the partial shade of this Texas version of the Tropics labored my breathing. Feel the weather.

Three miles due east and past the Intra coastal Canal lay the Gulf of Mexico.

l knocked on the screen door. An army green canvass tarp draped over the top and strapped down with black rubber bungee straps, gave off a familiar odor of water proofing. The sound of someone fumbling with the door.

Roof leaking or camouflage? The trailer didn't look that old.

A late model pick-up under the make-shift carport topped by the same kind of tarp tenting.

An unkempt Caucasian woman  came to the door carrying a brown faced baby. Her dark hair was pulled back and she wore no make up , her face was pleasant in a ugly sort of way. She did not look happy answering the door to a stranger. She stared blankly at me like she wanted me to start the conversation. And then, "Wha' da you want?" she said. I could feel the cold air and the sick fumes of baby, mother, nicotine and something that smelled like burning incense.

"I'm looking for a Tony Villanosa"

A conversation ensued and she said Tony Villanosa was hunting in Mexico.

But the pick-up and a caged Pit-mixed dog in the back and gear in the open bed,  What looked like gun cases and medal ammo boxes, all said different.

"Nice dog, is she easy to handle?" I asked trying to calm he down. "That's Tony's dog I don't do nothin' with that dog. Gotta go," she grunted slamming the door.

My stomach ached for her and did not want to agitate her, plus there was a good chance, in my mind, there could be a different story. Something closer to the truth. My pistol was in the glove box.

I followed the drive out the opposite direction drove to the end to the road that lead to a different exit on to the main road. I stopped and waited. I rolled down a window and listened. The sound of a vehicle starting, being gunned, sounded like a truck. I thought it might be comming my way but it didn't. I pulled out onto the black top. and made a three point turn. I circled around and the truck was gone. When back out to the black top. I could see the pick up in the distance and with the aid od my binoculars I saw two heads in the cab. I circled bacb to the trailor and ring the bell. No answer. I started to force the lock when a man in a Toyoto drove by 

Chapter TwoScary scene

The man in the Toyota drove on by and I rang the door bell.
( this naked guy is waring underware and looks like a bath salts model - poster boy) somebodys addicted son...

I tie him up and leave... the old man ask for ... I get him a drink and the naked kid is quiet  go back to check and he's dis appeared. be fore I start the car I see the keys swinging in the lock. start the car

Broke in  the bed rooms that were locked the first on had an
old man the next was a naded guy who keep charging  me but even thought he kept comming at me I cold cocked him but he would not stay down... were locked and

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